Mystery Tracks Shh

I liked the wording, but i believe it is too short to really understand the character's emotions.

This was a great piece. I liked it. I could not pick out any errors! good work

Well, it was not great but it was good. I don't really know how to describe it since I am very bad at reviews...

I liked it, but I didn't really understand it really. It was kind of confusing... Well, it just might be me. XD

I liked this. I thought it had a good rhythem. I also liked how you thought of what you didn't want to see or hear in the first stanza. I ...

I liked it, but I was kind of confused about it the same time. Other than that, even though I didn't get it, I really liked how it sounded when ...

I really like how you write! It's lovely!

awww! that is really good! :) Thank You!

This is really good! Keep writing!